Mother you care
But all I do is stare
You tell me this & that
But I look like I don't give a crap
We argue about my mess
But my room is my nest
I'm young but iv loved
I'm hopefull
But everyday I feel dull
I'm aware that life isn't a grand fair
But I never knew love was all but fair
I love you mom
Even when I don't share
I just feel like I don't want to care
Mothers like you , always rare
To not care about you, I would never dare
You lived
Loved
Your my dove
You never let me go
Always told me I have the leading role
Director of my own show
I know what true love is
Not because you told me
But because of the pain I saw from you
Again I'm sorry because I stare
Never reply
Walk away and sigh
I look like my emotions are dry
But trust me I try
Every day I cry
I'm sorry mom
I swear
Someday I'll try
Just let me live and die
Ion not my father
I will never leave your side
I love you mom
I do
Alright, it seems a bit amateur but I can tell it came from the heart.
ReplyDeleteThere are a few things I would change, but then again its mostly wording. I like to make things more elusive than they are (that's just me).
Oh yea, and you'll need to get on the computer and fix all your mistakes... there are plenty.
All in all I give it a 6/10
*I've seen better from you, but respecting your circumstances I feel the effort and genuine feeling behind your words.
-adey <3
I hate you LOL this was meant to be easy on the mind be straight forward for a change :p
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